tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post3979076971607699868..comments2023-10-06T07:51:14.292-04:00Comments on April Wine: One Single Impression: (movement) Summer's BreezeLaurieluchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11919811587393482078noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-77601445356975263612009-02-12T02:57:00.000-05:002009-02-12T02:57:00.000-05:00Enjoyed reading these warm weather verbs- descript...Enjoyed reading these warm weather verbs- <BR/>descriptive and playful!I hope it took some of the chill off of your snowy times!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-364127488798424662009-02-10T19:57:00.000-05:002009-02-10T19:57:00.000-05:00I bet there are an awful lot of folks longing for ...I bet there are an awful lot of folks longing for summer right now! Very nice poem with sunshine-Kilauea Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10565265326716182821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-19820895927878073042009-02-09T15:06:00.000-05:002009-02-09T15:06:00.000-05:00perfect moments of movementperfect moments of movementAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-66388211093446919562009-02-09T14:30:00.000-05:002009-02-09T14:30:00.000-05:00Great movement and flow in this piece! Love it.......Great movement and flow in this piece! Love it....Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-19024240516950618712009-02-09T09:55:00.000-05:002009-02-09T09:55:00.000-05:00ahhhh!that lovely feeling of timelessness, motionl...ahhhh!<BR/>that lovely feeling of timelessness, motionlessness!<BR/><BR/>They don't last that long, though...but wonderful to remember.<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Laurie!Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-1163449808143393722009-02-08T19:01:00.000-05:002009-02-08T19:01:00.000-05:00Intriguing! With my penchant for writing dream po...Intriguing! With my penchant for writing dream poetry, I read this as being about an ultimately sad dream on a summer's evening...taking "cleave" in it's "cut apart" meaning. When I read it in it's "stick together" meaning I read the poem to be about a very sensual experience. I really enjoy ambiguity. :-)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-79251629377802926862009-02-08T18:19:00.000-05:002009-02-08T18:19:00.000-05:00i like the cleave is a self-contradicting word:sti...i like the cleave is a self-contradicting word:<BR/><BR/>stick together<BR/>cut apartBruce Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12820133295308884414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-19352423740573705352009-02-08T17:39:00.000-05:002009-02-08T17:39:00.000-05:00i like the ordering of your words and the way this...i like the ordering of your words and the way this flowsfloretahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-91310918805601491232009-02-08T17:30:00.000-05:002009-02-08T17:30:00.000-05:00I sure do like that very beautiful movement. The w...I sure do like that very beautiful movement. <BR/><BR/>The word "breeze" is full of easy summer peace. Thanks for reminding me!<BR/><BR/>Great stuff, Laurie.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-22455589515344721212009-02-08T15:53:00.000-05:002009-02-08T15:53:00.000-05:00Love the circular nature of this poem. It makes i...Love the circular nature of this poem. It makes it impossible to pause and stop the movement.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-2200768844515132342009-02-08T14:36:00.000-05:002009-02-08T14:36:00.000-05:00You made me ache for summer! Such beautiful and vi...You made me ache for summer! Such beautiful and vivid imagery.Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-36194560759821998922009-02-08T11:23:00.000-05:002009-02-08T11:23:00.000-05:00I agree! Very vivid indeed!movementI agree! Very vivid indeed!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/02/movement.html" REL="nofollow">movement</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175758419097689662.post-62459123382448567122009-02-08T10:37:00.000-05:002009-02-08T10:37:00.000-05:00Love how you looped this one around. Very vivid!Love how you looped this one around. Very vivid!Deborah Godinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175977572194074388noreply@blogger.com